From the article: The Haunted House
Do you have comments or advice for Julia? What was particularly good about the story? Are there things that could be improved?
predictable
- I really did enjoy your story! it was very descriptive just the way i like them, however it was very predictable who the killer was just from the begginging. But i did really enjoy reading it.
- —Guest chichi
Reader
- I liked the way you ended the story. Very clever and sort of left with comedy relief.
- —Guest Ana
Student
- That was very suspensful for being so short. You did a great job, and the humor at the end was unexpected, but was completely appropriate. Thanks for the great read!
- —Guest Austin