From the article: Apparitions
Do you have comments or advice for Steven? What was particularly good about the story? Are there things that could be improved?
OMG!!
- Ohmygosh!! That is SOO amazing! You are a terrific writer. I wasn't expecting the couple to be the parents of the man! Well, up until he said that he'd been adopted. But still. Keep up the great work!!
- —Guest Dakota Rae