From the article: Bonnie Prince Charlie's Halloween
Do you have comments or advice for Gail? What was particularly good about the story? Are there things that could be improved?
Bonnie Prince Charlie's halloween
- Thank you, I appreciate your responses. Glad you enhoyed it, the giggle at the end was the point. Happy writing.
- —Guest Gael Mc
Bonnie Story
- Nicely done!!! Funny ending...and appropriate to those who play with ghosts.
- —Guest Barbara R
Imaginative Version of History
- I liked your story. Different. I loved the last line, and could just imagine the speed of the three brave souls getting to the car. Made me laugh.
- —Guest janalma
Well Done
- I loved this story. The narration was crisp and it flowed beautifully. Your use of detailed descriptions was excellent.
- —Guest ron.carr@hotmail.com