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How to Freewrite

By Ginny Wiehardt, About.com

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Choose a few things to develop into a story.

In this writing sample, I see two different possibilities. For starters, I could focus on the little girl with the strawberry mole. Maybe her mother is actually embarrassed by the mole. Maybe people mistook the mole for a wound of some kind when the girl was a baby, and the young mother came to feel that there was something wrong with her. Maybe over time the mole had come to represent her sense of her daughter's otherness. Or I could take it a science fiction or magic realism direction: maybe the girl really does have some kind of supernatural power associated with the mole, and the mother has a reason to feel afraid of her daughter.

The more obvious choice, though, would be to continue the story of the walk in the rain. My original musings were about a walk I took with a friend during college, but for dramatic purposes I could change it from a platonic relationship to a romantic one. I probably would want to write about an adult relationship instead of a college relationship, so "We walked down to the creek the last year we lived in the dorms," would become, "We walked down to the creek the last day we lived on Hemlock." Now there's a story: A couple takes one last walk to a loved creek before moving out of a house. They're separating, and the separation has to do with the man's coldness. The swollen creek becomes a symbol for the emotions the narrator has had to repress in living with him. Yet they are both still the kind of people who take barefoot walks in the rain. Or perhaps they used to be those kinds of people, and they're also saying good-bye to their former selves, the selves who fell in love with each other.

Anyway, you get the idea. Feel free to choose a writing prompt, if you'd like, and then get a timer, a pen, and some paper, and try it yourself!

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